Well done Liana, a good start. This will need extra detail though as you'll convincingly need to fill the page. There is plenty of scope to pad out the introduction. You can write more about Nashville (you are aware that its the home of country music?), or you could send Hayley on a tour of rock and roll sites across the states, there is Sun Studios Tenesse where Elvis recorded, Chicago for Chess records (Chuck Berry, Bo Didley, Muddy Waters, Etta James ("I'd rather go blind" is unbelievable) and Howlin Wolf plus countless other places.
Well done Liana, a good start. This will need extra detail though as you'll convincingly need to fill the page. There is plenty of scope to pad out the introduction. You can write more about Nashville (you are aware that its the home of country music?), or you could send Hayley on a tour of rock and roll sites across the states, there is Sun Studios Tenesse where Elvis recorded, Chicago for Chess records (Chuck Berry, Bo Didley, Muddy Waters, Etta James ("I'd rather go blind" is unbelievable) and Howlin Wolf plus countless other places.
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